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Understanding some of the traits shared by good CSIs will help you write characters that stay “in character”. CSIs are a weird bunch. We’re not like everyone else. We’re fascinated by things that would give most folks nightmares. Not in a macabre way, more clinical, but fascinated nonetheless. CSIs are naturally curious, driven (stubborn), and highly skeptical but, surprisingly low key. We care that a crime has been committed but, we don’t care if it was Joe or Sam who committed it. We are advocates for the analysis, not the outcome. Traits like that make us good at our jobs.

When CSIs arrive at a crime scene we are briefed by the first responder(s). Most of the time that’s the first officer on scene but may also include detectives, coroner’s investigators, paramedics, and civilian witnesses. There is always a story. “So and so committed suicide” or “the suspect kicked in the door here and ransacked the house”, etc. There are degrees of accuracy to all of our briefings but they are based largely on first impressions or eye-witness accounts. CSIs want to go beyond first impressions. We never accept any statement as fact until we gather the evidence to support it.

Neutrality is a cornerstone of a thorough analysis. Take deaths for example. I’ve investigated all kinds and every time I would write my initial reports and notes I would classify the case as a “death investigation”. It’s common during press conferences to hear a PIO say something like “we’re treating this like a homicide until the evidence proves otherwise.” I’ve never operated that way. I didn’t want to be predisposed, even subconsciously, to any particular position; especially the manner of death. My thought was “there’s a dead guy…what happened?” To me, it’s a much better starting point.

Crime scene reconstruction is no easy task (despite what you see on television). It’s like assembling a jigsaw puzzle with one-tenth of the pieces and no box cover. That’s frustrating because we like things to make sense but we never have a “complete” picture. So we learn to approach things cautiously and conservatively until we’re convinced by a preponderance of the facts. This takes time and that drives our bosses crazy. We can’t even answer simple questions like “how much longer will you be?” How should I know? I’ll be done when I’m done.

The most important thing to remember is that, as far as character traits are concerned, we’re always on the clock. It’s amazing to me that some folks are surprised at this. If my wife drags me to the mall, I don’t sit around playing a game on my smart phone. I’m busy checking out shoe patterns, spotting potential shoplifters, or just watching people’s behavior. I remember one time a bunch of us were eating lunch and one guy arrived late. He said he had to change a flat tire. I nodded like everyone else but all through lunch I was thinking why aren’t your hands dirty? Why aren’t your knees or pants the least bit dirty? Why are you lying to us? What are you hiding?

I’m not saying he had done anything illegal or immoral. Maybe he was embarrassed about the thing that made him late. Maybe he got into a fender bender and didn’t want anyone to know. The point is…we can’t turn the curiosity switch off.  In some ways we’re like two-year-olds always asking “why…why…why?” Things have to “make sense” and we notice when they don’t. It doesn’t matter if it’s at work, in our personal lives, or at our kid’s soccer game. Developing the ability to spot inconsistencies is vital to our success.

So when you’re writing a CSI character (or detective for that matter) keep in mind that they are professional observers. Our job is to spot the professional liar and we get better and better with every crime scene we work. We’re not easily fooled and we’ll likely over-analyze any situation. That’s not to say we’re never fooled, just not easily. We can be blinded by things like friendship, passion, fear, and all the other emotions out there. We’re just more insulated from emotions than most. If we weren’t, we’d be led around by the nose instead of following our own.

BloodlinesTom Adair is a former CSI and author of the 2013 crime thriller Bloodlines.  He also writes on forensic topics for fiction writers at www.forensics4fiction.com

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If we look at life there is at least one issue from our past that is like a knife in our side. People hurt each other; sometimes accidental and other times on purpose, which creates a division that can last for decades.

These are burned bridges.

Burned Bridges (The Crossing Mystery Series) Chapter Samples by Marguerite Ashton

The detective in my book is trying to solve the murder of a male found shot and dumped in the lake. Do all detectives attend the autopsies of their victims or is it done on special circumstances only?

Joe Giacalone, blogger over at Cold Case Squad replied:

Yes. The case detective has to appear usually by 9AM the next morning on every dead body case to be present at the autopsy.

They’re in the room as it happens and will observe, ask questions and answer questions that the ME or Coroner may have.

It is important that they bring investigative reports, crime scene photos and collect any evidence that the ME finds. I.E. ballistics.

 

There will be another post on this topic over at Cold Case Squad. I’ll post the link here when it’s finished.

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Joe GiacaloneJoe Giacalone is a retired Detective Sergeant and former Commanding Officer of the Bronx Cold Case Squad that has investigated hundreds of homicides, cold cases and missing persons.

He is the author of the Criminal Investigative Function: A Guide for New Investigators - 2nd Edition published by Looseleaf Law Publications, Inc.

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Below is a list of my favorite blogs that I find useful for honing my craft to crime research.

If you haven’t come across at least one of the websites below, I’m hoping you can find the listing helpful.

http://mysterywritingismurder.blogspot.com/

http://forensics4fiction.com/

http://writersforensicsblog.wordpress.com/

http://www.criminalelement.com/

http://murderiseverywhere.blogspot.com/

http://mainecrimewriters.com/

http://coldcasesquad.blogspot.com/

http://midnightwriters.blogspot.com/

http://www.murderati.com/

http://badluckdetective.wordpress.com/

http://www.defrostingcoldcases.com/

http://crimefictioncollective.blogspot.com/

http://www.wow-womenonwriting.com/

http://jodierennerediting.blogspot.com/

 

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If you missed the free online workshop back in November ~ Here’s your chance to see it…

Welcome to the Crime Writers’ Panel.

Streamed live on Nov 2, 2012.

We are a cadre of current and former law enforcement investigators, supervisors, forensic experts, investigative reporters and experts in the field of corrections. Visit us on Facebook and ask your questions to write better fiction. http://www.facebook.com/CrimeWritersPanel

Joe and I are looking at February to host the next one. We will see and keep you updated!

I’ve received questions from writers wondering what ways can their detective obtain DNA. They have also asked, “Can police forcibly take DNA?”

I had to admit, I had no clue and turned to Joe Giacalone to see if he had a post that I could use and he did. He gave me permission to repost his article here on Criminal Lines.

The 3 Ways Police Obtain DNA Samples Lawfully

By: Joseph L. Giacalone

By now you have seen all of the television shows, read the mystery books and listened to news casts on how DNA help solve a cold case. DNA happens to be one of the most important law enforcement tools used to solve crimes. However, there is one constant in all of this and that is how law enforcement can lawfully obtain a DNA exemplar.

Law enforcement agencies have been playing the forensic “catch-up” game for a number of years. They learn the new methods and technologies and then the forensic science community discovers a new way of doing it. It is a constant learning curve for law enforcement. The advances in forensics and DNA are exponential and law enforcement has made a herculean effort to stay on top of this technology.

Obtaining a DNA exemplar is just like collecting other pieces of evidence. Law enforcement understands that the public now demands to see the forensic evidence, especially DNA, that ties the suspect to the victim, the suspect to the scene or the suspect to the weapon. Call it the “CSI Effect” or anything else that you want to, but the jury wants to see more of it. Many times investigators recover DNA at a crime scene, but when the sample is entered into the Combined DNA Index System (CODIS), it comes back as “No Hit.” As the investigation progresses and suspects are developed, investigators need to obtain exemplars to either exclude or include the suspect.

Each action that investigators take could have a reaction in the suspect. Move to soon and you can spook them, move to late and the hunt is on. The question remains, “How can law enforcement legally obtain a DNA exemplar from a suspect? There are only three (3) ways to do so that I refer to as the 3 Cs:

1. Consent

2. Court Order

3. Covertly
Consent

In order to get consent, you have to ask. The suspect must agree to provide the sample voluntarily, knowingly and intelligently. Which means that he is old enough, understands what he / she is doing and the consequences of the action and they weren’t tricked, forced or coerced. But what do you think will happen once the investigator asks for a DNA sample? Right, your suspect is gone in the wind and your investigation just got ten times more difficult.

Court Order

In order to get a warrant for taking a DNA sample, investigators must have probable cause. Generally, in these cases, the suspect is already in custody, so there is no threat of him fleeing and probable cause has already been established. If he wasn’t in custody, that would mean that probable cause has not been established and therefore couldn’t get a warrant.

Covertly

Obtaining a DNA sample covertly, (secretly or surreptitiously) is not as easy as it sounds or shown on television. Detectives must work carefully and fast when they need to recover a discarded sample. On television, detectives are always able to recover the bottle of water or can of soda for their exemplar. However, the target probably watches television too! Now investigators have to conduct surveillance and wait for the suspect to spit, discard a cigarette or half eaten food to obtain the sample.

Law enforcement must carefully obtain a DNA exemplar or risk it being excluded in pretrial evidence hearings. Sometimes obtaining a DNA exemplar is the only thing standing in the way of an arrest and conviction and even exoneration of innocent person wrongfully accused.

Related Articles by Joe on The Cold Case Squad

Edmond Locard: Forensic Rock Star #1
Dr. Sir Alec Jeffreys: Forensic Rock Star #2
Are Investigators Relying too Much on Forensic Evidence?
Detectives Love Blue Star Blood Identifying Agent
Cause of Death vs. Manner of Death

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As a freelance writer or business owner, you know how important marketing and promoting your business is. Well-written marketing materials are a vital part of your effort to help publicize, advertise, or promote a person, place, or thing. Also known as copywriting, its purpose is to motivate, entice, or persuade someone to take action. Examples of marketing pieces are ads, advertorials, catalog excerpts and item descriptions, biographical sketches, and may even include blogging, Web site text, and media releases.

Because marketing through news outlets plays such a huge role in the successful promotion of any business, I will start by giving some tips on how to write a press or media release. The term “press” release is a little dated because it has to do with the printing press. Many news releases these days are syndicated online, so a more up-to-date term is “media” release since it encompasses both print and online sources. Your media release needs to be news worthy, disseminate information, and give a call to take action (such as “call now” or “visit [URL] for more information”). Ideally, the release should be less than 750 words in the average media release. When possible, tie the release into something already happening in the news. Look for a way to tag onto a political event, action of a celebrity, death of a famous person, etc.

When to Write a Media Release

Any time you have news about your company or an employee, someone gets a promotion, achieves an accomplishment, has a new product to offer, your book wins an award, or whenever you have something to celebrate is a good time to write a media release. There are several things that should be present in a good media release.

· Title

· Subtitle

· Opening or first paragraph

·Body text

·About section

·Closing paragraph

·End of document signal

·Contact info

The Title of your release is very important. It needs to be a concise statement of what the release is about. Think of it as a teaser to get the reader to move to the subtitle to find out more. You also want to use keywords to attract search engines and journalists looking for a story or an expert to interview.

A very common error in many of the books I edit or proofread occurs in the title, headers, and subheaders. The Chicago Manual of Style states:

In regular title capitalization, also known as headline style, the first and last words and all nouns, pronouns, adjectives, verbs, adverbs, and subordinating conjunctions (if, because, as, that, etc.) are capitalized. Articles (a, an, the), coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, for, nor), and prepositions, regardless of length, are lowercase unless they are the first or last word of the title.

The Subtitle should tell a little more than the title and lead into the first paragraph. It’s a summary that takes the reader one more step into the piece. The subtitle should also use heading or title case.

The First Paragraph of your media release should get right to the point and clearly answer the Five Ws of Writing a Media Release:

1. Who is the story about?

2. What is the story about?

3. When did or will it occur?

4. Where did or will it occur?

5. Why did or will it happen?

The title, subtitle, and opening paragraph are the three most important components so make sure these are as strong and as enticing as you can make them. You want the reader to keep reading!

The Body Text gives more information and fills in the details of the Five W’s to convey the entire story.

The About Section tells more about the company or person mentioned in the release. It is a short bio of about two to three sentences.

The Closing Paragraph may give a call to take action in the final paragraph (such as “call xxx or go to xxx for more info”).

By typing and centering ### after your closing paragraph, you have indicated that the release has ended. The media expect to find your contact information following this signal.

Add your Contact Information so the media can reach you. Include your name, phone number, Web site URL, and email address. A postal address is optional.

Yvonne PerryAfter spending several years in a corporate setting, Yvonne Perry decided to make a brave move and start her own freelance writing company. Leaving her full-time position as an administrative assistant in the sales and marketing division of a Fortune 500 company, she started her new career in 2003 with very little business experience. Today, she is the owner of Writers in the Sky Creative Writing Services where she serves as a freelance ghostwriter and editor for individuals and businesses.

By aligning herself and her company with other writers and experts in the field, Perry has networked her company to the top as a premier ghostwriter and editor in Nashville, Tennessee. She and her team stay busy on client projects such as writing media releases, ghostwriting and editing books, article writing, creating ad copy, and producing business documents. The team provides writing and editing services to individuals while offering a logical way for large corporations to outsource their writing needs. Thanks to the Internet, the company’s reputation has reached international status. With her wide variety of writing experience that includes impressive résumés, personal and professional bios, high-quality press releases and articles, as well as case studies, proposals and marketing pieces, Yvonne is ready to work with you on your next project.

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Tonight is the night and I just wanted to send out reminders that there are four ways that you can contact the panel members during tonight’s workshop.

1. Twitter: use hashtag #crimewriterspanel

2. Email: use crimewriterspanel@margueriteashton.com

3. Facebook: use Crime Writers’ Panel. Just type your questions in the status bubble.

4. Google Chat: can be accessed as long as you have a Gmail account.

The name of the Google+ hangout will be Crime Writers Panel.

We’re happy with the response and look forward to answering your questions.