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Understanding some of the traits shared by good CSIs will help you write characters that stay “in character”. CSIs are a weird bunch. We’re not like everyone else. We’re fascinated by things that would give most folks nightmares. Not in a macabre way, more clinical, but fascinated nonetheless. CSIs are naturally curious, driven (stubborn), and highly skeptical but, surprisingly low key. We care that a crime has been committed but, we don’t care if it was Joe or Sam who committed it. We are advocates for the analysis, not the outcome. Traits like that make us good at our jobs.

When CSIs arrive at a crime scene we are briefed by the first responder(s). Most of the time that’s the first officer on scene but may also include detectives, coroner’s investigators, paramedics, and civilian witnesses. There is always a story. “So and so committed suicide” or “the suspect kicked in the door here and ransacked the house”, etc. There are degrees of accuracy to all of our briefings but they are based largely on first impressions or eye-witness accounts. CSIs want to go beyond first impressions. We never accept any statement as fact until we gather the evidence to support it.

Neutrality is a cornerstone of a thorough analysis. Take deaths for example. I’ve investigated all kinds and every time I would write my initial reports and notes I would classify the case as a “death investigation”. It’s common during press conferences to hear a PIO say something like “we’re treating this like a homicide until the evidence proves otherwise.” I’ve never operated that way. I didn’t want to be predisposed, even subconsciously, to any particular position; especially the manner of death. My thought was “there’s a dead guy…what happened?” To me, it’s a much better starting point.

Crime scene reconstruction is no easy task (despite what you see on television). It’s like assembling a jigsaw puzzle with one-tenth of the pieces and no box cover. That’s frustrating because we like things to make sense but we never have a “complete” picture. So we learn to approach things cautiously and conservatively until we’re convinced by a preponderance of the facts. This takes time and that drives our bosses crazy. We can’t even answer simple questions like “how much longer will you be?” How should I know? I’ll be done when I’m done.

The most important thing to remember is that, as far as character traits are concerned, we’re always on the clock. It’s amazing to me that some folks are surprised at this. If my wife drags me to the mall, I don’t sit around playing a game on my smart phone. I’m busy checking out shoe patterns, spotting potential shoplifters, or just watching people’s behavior. I remember one time a bunch of us were eating lunch and one guy arrived late. He said he had to change a flat tire. I nodded like everyone else but all through lunch I was thinking why aren’t your hands dirty? Why aren’t your knees or pants the least bit dirty? Why are you lying to us? What are you hiding?

I’m not saying he had done anything illegal or immoral. Maybe he was embarrassed about the thing that made him late. Maybe he got into a fender bender and didn’t want anyone to know. The point is…we can’t turn the curiosity switch off.  In some ways we’re like two-year-olds always asking “why…why…why?” Things have to “make sense” and we notice when they don’t. It doesn’t matter if it’s at work, in our personal lives, or at our kid’s soccer game. Developing the ability to spot inconsistencies is vital to our success.

So when you’re writing a CSI character (or detective for that matter) keep in mind that they are professional observers. Our job is to spot the professional liar and we get better and better with every crime scene we work. We’re not easily fooled and we’ll likely over-analyze any situation. That’s not to say we’re never fooled, just not easily. We can be blinded by things like friendship, passion, fear, and all the other emotions out there. We’re just more insulated from emotions than most. If we weren’t, we’d be led around by the nose instead of following our own.

BloodlinesTom Adair is a former CSI and author of the 2013 crime thriller Bloodlines.  He also writes on forensic topics for fiction writers at www.forensics4fiction.com

How did I come up with the title?

If we look at life there is at least one issue from our past that is like a knife in our side. People hurt each other; sometimes accidental and other times on purpose, which creates a division that can last for decades.

These are burned bridges.

Burned Bridges (The Crossing Mystery Series) Chapter Samples by Marguerite Ashton

2nd Ed Cover smallWith the release of The Criminal Investigative Function: A Guide for New Investigators - 2nd Edition and his retirement from the force, Joe Giacalone is enjoying what it feels like to be a best selling author.

Not only has his textbook been chosen as required reading by the New Jersey Civil Service Commision, but he has been approached for interviews and consulted on numerous cases regarding criminal investigations and missing persons.

I’ve read the first book and can’t wait to get my hands on the second edition. This a good tool for new investigators to use; it is also a helpful resource book for us crime and mystery writers.

P.S. A little birdie told me that he’s currently working on his next book. :)

About the Book The Criminal Investigative Function: A Guide for New Investigators, is a candid, real-world look at  investigations, from the crime scene to the courtroom, shared by an ACTUAL investigator. No ivory tower theory. Just the real deal!

The text  has been expanded and completely revised with photos and illustrations!

A  seasoned investigator taps his years of street experience to teach you the:    

• Core qualities that make for a great investigator.

• Important legalities that impact investigations.

• Crime scene protocols that must be followed.

• New DNA  and Forensic Techniques.

• Best follow-up investigation strategies.

• Aspects of Interview and Interrogation.

• Keys to  dealing with eyewitnesses.

• Investigative Report Writing.

• Steps in Solving Major Crimes and Missing Persons cases.

Each  chapter includes summary questions for discussion and review.

Publisher:

Looseleaf Law Publications, Inc.

43-08 162nd St

Flushing, NY  11358

1-800-647-5547    

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About the  Author / Law Enforcement Trainer / Media Consultant

Joseph L. Giacalone is a retired Detective Sergeant with an extensive background in criminal investigations. He has held many prestigious positions, but his favorite was the Commanding Officer of a Cold Case Homicide Squad. Joe has personally worked on hundreds of murders, suicides and missing person cases throughout his career and is always willing to share his knowledge and experiences with others.

He obtained a Master of Arts Degree in Criminal Justice with a Specialty in Crime and Deviance from John Jay College of Criminal Justice in 2005. He has been an Adjunct Professor at John Jay since January of 2006.

In his spare time, he writes his own criminal investigation Blog, www.coldcasesquad.com

You can follow Joe and the Cold Case Squad on Twitter: @ColdCaseSquad and @JoeGiacalone or through his website http://joegwrites.com/

The Criminal Investigative Function: A Guide for New
Investigators on Amazon - 1st Edition

See below for other posts related to this article:

Between the Chalk Lines: Warming Up to Cold Cases

Crime Writers’ Panel for Upcoming Workshop

A Quick Guide to Miranda for Crime Writers Part 2

Writer Question: Can Police Forcibly Take DNA?

Guest Blogger Joe Giacalone: Can My Character Do That?

Writers and published authors need to take advantage of the number one method of book selling-the Internet. The Internet is the greatest selling and marketing tool available to an author. There are many opportunities and different ways to do achieve this. Here are a few online marketing tips for new authors.

One the simplest, most cost-effective ways to reach a broad online audience with your product and urge the reader into action is social networking. I’m referring to sites and online places where people share friendship and information. I love Goodreads and I get a lot of response whenever I post an event on that site. I am signed up not only as a reader, but as an author, which gives me a profile and the ability to promote my products. Other sites such as Ning, and Plaxo are also places you can let others know about you book, blog tour, or other marketing events.

The basic techniques for marketing fiction are the same as those of marketing nonfiction, so the methods work well in either case. However, a new author needs to know her target readership. A romance book will typically draw a different type of audience than a how-to book on gardening or fishing. So, when establishing a following on social networking sites such as Facebook, Twitter, GoodReads, Ning, Yahoo groups, and other sites, search for people by reading their profiles. Look for keywords that describe or relate to the topic of your book. Look for people who read the types of books you write.

The biggest mistake authors make when attempting to market their books is going out unprepared or without having a marketing plan or the information necessary to successfully create the buzz. Many authors do not even have a Web site or blog with a point of purchase that gives the reader enough information about the book to actually make an informed purchase. An author needs to know what components are necessary to have on a site in order to compete in today’s online marketplace. This is where a marketing plan comes in handy. It takes time and consistent effort to build your following and get people interested in your book before they will take action. It’s been said that someone must see or hear about a product seven times before they will buy it. Book marketing success may not happen overnight, but you will begin to see steady progress if you stay at it. It will take you about six months to complete everything in the eBook because some of it has to be set up such as Web sites, blog tours, and social networks.

Yvonne Perry

After spending several years in a corporate setting, Yvonne Perry decided to make a brave move and start her own freelance writing company. Leaving her full-time position as an administrative assistant in the sales and marketing division of a Fortune 500 company, she started her new career in 2003 with very little business experience. Today, she is the owner of Writers in the Sky Creative Writing Services where she serves as a freelance ghostwriter and editor for individuals and businesses.

By aligning herself and her company with other writers and experts in the field, Perry has networked her company to the top as a premier ghostwriter and editor in Nashville, Tennessee. She and her team stay busy on client projects such as writing media releases, ghostwriting and editing books, article writing, creating ad copy, and producing business documents. The team provides writing and editing services to individuals while offering a logical way for large corporations to outsource their writing needs. Thanks to the Internet, the company’s reputation has reached international status. With her wide variety of writing experience that includes impressive résumés, personal and professional bios, high-quality press releases and articles, as well as case studies, proposals and marketing pieces, Yvonne is ready to work with you on your next project.

For more on Yvonne Perry and a list of her books, please visit Writers in the Sky.

 

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If you missed the free online workshop back in November ~ Here’s your chance to see it…

Welcome to the Crime Writers’ Panel.

Streamed live on Nov 2, 2012.

We are a cadre of current and former law enforcement investigators, supervisors, forensic experts, investigative reporters and experts in the field of corrections. Visit us on Facebook and ask your questions to write better fiction. http://www.facebook.com/CrimeWritersPanel

Joe and I are looking at February to host the next one. We will see and keep you updated!

Yes!
If there is one thing I love the most is making my readers happy.

Here are some excerpts from reviews that I’ve received. Burned Bridges

Reviewed by Renata F. Barcelos for Readers Favorite

The dialogue is excellent and the plot is well-done with a compelling ending. I loved the Traci character and would like to know more about the past of this intense woman, perhaps in a sequel. I’d recommend this book to anyone looking for a mystery with drama and a bit of romance.

4.0 out of 5 stars An unexpectedly good first novel, surprising and real… November 16, 2012

By HRR

It is surprisingly real, in a world of fantasy books with supernatural elements where characters are nothing like real people physically, emotionally or otherwise.

4.0 out of 5 stars Compelling debut novel with ethical theme December 1, 2012

By O. Barnack

It is well written and edited, with a believably imperfect central character who struggles to do the right thing in trying circumstances.

To read more, please visit, http://burnedbridgesthebook.com/book-reviews/

If you’re interested in purchasing a copy: Ebook or Paperback

Thanks for reading.

As a freelance writer or business owner, you know how important marketing and promoting your business is. Well-written marketing materials are a vital part of your effort to help publicize, advertise, or promote a person, place, or thing. Also known as copywriting, its purpose is to motivate, entice, or persuade someone to take action. Examples of marketing pieces are ads, advertorials, catalog excerpts and item descriptions, biographical sketches, and may even include blogging, Web site text, and media releases.

Because marketing through news outlets plays such a huge role in the successful promotion of any business, I will start by giving some tips on how to write a press or media release. The term “press” release is a little dated because it has to do with the printing press. Many news releases these days are syndicated online, so a more up-to-date term is “media” release since it encompasses both print and online sources. Your media release needs to be news worthy, disseminate information, and give a call to take action (such as “call now” or “visit [URL] for more information”). Ideally, the release should be less than 750 words in the average media release. When possible, tie the release into something already happening in the news. Look for a way to tag onto a political event, action of a celebrity, death of a famous person, etc.

When to Write a Media Release

Any time you have news about your company or an employee, someone gets a promotion, achieves an accomplishment, has a new product to offer, your book wins an award, or whenever you have something to celebrate is a good time to write a media release. There are several things that should be present in a good media release.

· Title

· Subtitle

· Opening or first paragraph

·Body text

·About section

·Closing paragraph

·End of document signal

·Contact info

The Title of your release is very important. It needs to be a concise statement of what the release is about. Think of it as a teaser to get the reader to move to the subtitle to find out more. You also want to use keywords to attract search engines and journalists looking for a story or an expert to interview.

A very common error in many of the books I edit or proofread occurs in the title, headers, and subheaders. The Chicago Manual of Style states:

In regular title capitalization, also known as headline style, the first and last words and all nouns, pronouns, adjectives, verbs, adverbs, and subordinating conjunctions (if, because, as, that, etc.) are capitalized. Articles (a, an, the), coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, for, nor), and prepositions, regardless of length, are lowercase unless they are the first or last word of the title.

The Subtitle should tell a little more than the title and lead into the first paragraph. It’s a summary that takes the reader one more step into the piece. The subtitle should also use heading or title case.

The First Paragraph of your media release should get right to the point and clearly answer the Five Ws of Writing a Media Release:

1. Who is the story about?

2. What is the story about?

3. When did or will it occur?

4. Where did or will it occur?

5. Why did or will it happen?

The title, subtitle, and opening paragraph are the three most important components so make sure these are as strong and as enticing as you can make them. You want the reader to keep reading!

The Body Text gives more information and fills in the details of the Five W’s to convey the entire story.

The About Section tells more about the company or person mentioned in the release. It is a short bio of about two to three sentences.

The Closing Paragraph may give a call to take action in the final paragraph (such as “call xxx or go to xxx for more info”).

By typing and centering ### after your closing paragraph, you have indicated that the release has ended. The media expect to find your contact information following this signal.

Add your Contact Information so the media can reach you. Include your name, phone number, Web site URL, and email address. A postal address is optional.

Yvonne PerryAfter spending several years in a corporate setting, Yvonne Perry decided to make a brave move and start her own freelance writing company. Leaving her full-time position as an administrative assistant in the sales and marketing division of a Fortune 500 company, she started her new career in 2003 with very little business experience. Today, she is the owner of Writers in the Sky Creative Writing Services where she serves as a freelance ghostwriter and editor for individuals and businesses.

By aligning herself and her company with other writers and experts in the field, Perry has networked her company to the top as a premier ghostwriter and editor in Nashville, Tennessee. She and her team stay busy on client projects such as writing media releases, ghostwriting and editing books, article writing, creating ad copy, and producing business documents. The team provides writing and editing services to individuals while offering a logical way for large corporations to outsource their writing needs. Thanks to the Internet, the company’s reputation has reached international status. With her wide variety of writing experience that includes impressive résumés, personal and professional bios, high-quality press releases and articles, as well as case studies, proposals and marketing pieces, Yvonne is ready to work with you on your next project.

For more on Yvonne Perry and a list of her books, please visit Writers in the Sky.

Hello Everyone,

I just dropped in to say that I’m offering my book, Burned Bridges for FREE from 11/11/ – 11/13 on Amazon and you can download it on your kindle.

I’m also happy to announce that it will be available in paperback at the end of the month.

In December, I will be hosting a giveaway and I want to thank you for your continued support as I  work on book #2 for The Crossing Series and participate in NaNoWriMo.

I hope you enjoy.

The links below will take you directly to the page.

Burned Bridges ~ Amazon (US)  Burned Bridges ~Amazon ~ (UK)

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