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Understanding some of the traits shared by good CSIs will help you write characters that stay “in character”. CSIs are a weird bunch. We’re not like everyone else. We’re fascinated by things that would give most folks nightmares. Not in a macabre way, more clinical, but fascinated nonetheless. CSIs are naturally curious, driven (stubborn), and highly skeptical but, surprisingly low key. We care that a crime has been committed but, we don’t care if it was Joe or Sam who committed it. We are advocates for the analysis, not the outcome. Traits like that make us good at our jobs.

When CSIs arrive at a crime scene we are briefed by the first responder(s). Most of the time that’s the first officer on scene but may also include detectives, coroner’s investigators, paramedics, and civilian witnesses. There is always a story. “So and so committed suicide” or “the suspect kicked in the door here and ransacked the house”, etc. There are degrees of accuracy to all of our briefings but they are based largely on first impressions or eye-witness accounts. CSIs want to go beyond first impressions. We never accept any statement as fact until we gather the evidence to support it.

Neutrality is a cornerstone of a thorough analysis. Take deaths for example. I’ve investigated all kinds and every time I would write my initial reports and notes I would classify the case as a “death investigation”. It’s common during press conferences to hear a PIO say something like “we’re treating this like a homicide until the evidence proves otherwise.” I’ve never operated that way. I didn’t want to be predisposed, even subconsciously, to any particular position; especially the manner of death. My thought was “there’s a dead guy…what happened?” To me, it’s a much better starting point.

Crime scene reconstruction is no easy task (despite what you see on television). It’s like assembling a jigsaw puzzle with one-tenth of the pieces and no box cover. That’s frustrating because we like things to make sense but we never have a “complete” picture. So we learn to approach things cautiously and conservatively until we’re convinced by a preponderance of the facts. This takes time and that drives our bosses crazy. We can’t even answer simple questions like “how much longer will you be?” How should I know? I’ll be done when I’m done.

The most important thing to remember is that, as far as character traits are concerned, we’re always on the clock. It’s amazing to me that some folks are surprised at this. If my wife drags me to the mall, I don’t sit around playing a game on my smart phone. I’m busy checking out shoe patterns, spotting potential shoplifters, or just watching people’s behavior. I remember one time a bunch of us were eating lunch and one guy arrived late. He said he had to change a flat tire. I nodded like everyone else but all through lunch I was thinking why aren’t your hands dirty? Why aren’t your knees or pants the least bit dirty? Why are you lying to us? What are you hiding?

I’m not saying he had done anything illegal or immoral. Maybe he was embarrassed about the thing that made him late. Maybe he got into a fender bender and didn’t want anyone to know. The point is…we can’t turn the curiosity switch off.  In some ways we’re like two-year-olds always asking “why…why…why?” Things have to “make sense” and we notice when they don’t. It doesn’t matter if it’s at work, in our personal lives, or at our kid’s soccer game. Developing the ability to spot inconsistencies is vital to our success.

So when you’re writing a CSI character (or detective for that matter) keep in mind that they are professional observers. Our job is to spot the professional liar and we get better and better with every crime scene we work. We’re not easily fooled and we’ll likely over-analyze any situation. That’s not to say we’re never fooled, just not easily. We can be blinded by things like friendship, passion, fear, and all the other emotions out there. We’re just more insulated from emotions than most. If we weren’t, we’d be led around by the nose instead of following our own.

BloodlinesTom Adair is a former CSI and author of the 2013 crime thriller Bloodlines.  He also writes on forensic topics for fiction writers at www.forensics4fiction.com

My Palm Springs Writer's Retreat ~ On the phone with a friend who's a retired LEO.

My Palm Springs Writer’s Retreat ~ On the phone with a friend who’s a retired LEO.

Talk about research. This round was heart wrenching and educational.

In my upcoming book, one of the detectives is shot and killed in the line of duty. At first I was going back and forth on whether or not to let her live. If so what would her life be like afterwards?

Then I thought about my protagonist. What would be one of the several things I could do to test her?

Finally, after writing a word or two and fussing with rewrites, I decided to make it difficult for my main character and add to her rollercoaster ride as she pushes to solve her case.

For the last two weeks I buried my head in books and had discussions with my friends in law enforcement to learn the proper way to pay tribute to a fallen officer. I even sent the chapter to one of them to see if he approved.

I didn’t want to be disrespectful, but I wanted the scene written correctly and he agreed.

If there is one thing that I’ve learned is that there is a brotherhood that exists among the officers who serve our country and cities; police, firefighters,  and military.

To the law enforcement officers all over, thank you for risking your lives to keep us safe.

Former homicide detective and author, Ken Lang

Former homicide detective and author, Ken Lang

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How did I come up with the title?

If we look at life there is at least one issue from our past that is like a knife in our side. People hurt each other; sometimes accidental and other times on purpose, which creates a division that can last for decades.

These are burned bridges.

Burned Bridges (The Crossing Mystery Series) Chapter Samples by Marguerite Ashton

2nd Ed Cover smallWith the release of The Criminal Investigative Function: A Guide for New Investigators - 2nd Edition and his retirement from the force, Joe Giacalone is enjoying what it feels like to be a best selling author.

Not only has his textbook been chosen as required reading by the New Jersey Civil Service Commision, but he has been approached for interviews and consulted on numerous cases regarding criminal investigations and missing persons.

I’ve read the first book and can’t wait to get my hands on the second edition. This a good tool for new investigators to use; it is also a helpful resource book for us crime and mystery writers.

P.S. A little birdie told me that he’s currently working on his next book. :)

About the Book The Criminal Investigative Function: A Guide for New Investigators, is a candid, real-world look at  investigations, from the crime scene to the courtroom, shared by an ACTUAL investigator. No ivory tower theory. Just the real deal!

The text  has been expanded and completely revised with photos and illustrations!

A  seasoned investigator taps his years of street experience to teach you the:    

• Core qualities that make for a great investigator.

• Important legalities that impact investigations.

• Crime scene protocols that must be followed.

• New DNA  and Forensic Techniques.

• Best follow-up investigation strategies.

• Aspects of Interview and Interrogation.

• Keys to  dealing with eyewitnesses.

• Investigative Report Writing.

• Steps in Solving Major Crimes and Missing Persons cases.

Each  chapter includes summary questions for discussion and review.

Publisher:

Looseleaf Law Publications, Inc.

43-08 162nd St

Flushing, NY  11358

1-800-647-5547    

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About the  Author / Law Enforcement Trainer / Media Consultant

Joseph L. Giacalone is a retired Detective Sergeant with an extensive background in criminal investigations. He has held many prestigious positions, but his favorite was the Commanding Officer of a Cold Case Homicide Squad. Joe has personally worked on hundreds of murders, suicides and missing person cases throughout his career and is always willing to share his knowledge and experiences with others.

He obtained a Master of Arts Degree in Criminal Justice with a Specialty in Crime and Deviance from John Jay College of Criminal Justice in 2005. He has been an Adjunct Professor at John Jay since January of 2006.

In his spare time, he writes his own criminal investigation Blog, www.coldcasesquad.com

You can follow Joe and the Cold Case Squad on Twitter: @ColdCaseSquad and @JoeGiacalone or through his website http://joegwrites.com/

The Criminal Investigative Function: A Guide for New
Investigators on Amazon - 1st Edition

See below for other posts related to this article:

Between the Chalk Lines: Warming Up to Cold Cases

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A Quick Guide to Miranda for Crime Writers Part 2

Writer Question: Can Police Forcibly Take DNA?

Guest Blogger Joe Giacalone: Can My Character Do That?

Courtesy of Joe Giacalone from Cold Case Squad.

Hey Everyone,

Here is the complete article from the recent post Writer Question: Does my Homicide Detective Need to Attend an Autopsy? Joe provided us with an answer and he gave me permission to share his post here on Criminal Lines.

Autopsy Protocol for Investigators

Detectives play an important role at the autopsy

By: Joseph L. Giacalone

How many autopsies have I attended? Enough or that I have witnessed my fair share should be a sufficient answer. The autopsy is one of the most important steps in the death investigation, especially when the case is equivocal – a fancy investigative term meaning, “I have no idea what happened.”

Detectives should be required to by department procedure to respond to every death (even in obvious cases), attend every autopsy and make sure that they are on time. The detective’s role is more than that of observer, but to be an active participant as well.
Autopsies are generally conducted the next morning and the case detective, if available  should be present. Many times the case detective may be tied up in the investigation, with court or with lineups, etc., so a responsible detective that has intimate knowledge of the case should go instead. The investigator(s) should be prepared to answer any questions that the medical examiner / coroner has. The main goal for attending the autopsy is to aid the medical examiner / coroner in establishing the manner of death (see article link below) so that the case does not get labeled as “Undetermined.”
Detectives should take with them the following items:

  • Case folder
  • Updated investigative reports – ensure that witness statements if any are updated
  • Crime Scene photos (official)
  • Crime Scene photos (taken by investigators)
  • Wound charts prepared by crime scene technicians
The crime scene photos, especially those taken at the scene by the detective, often play a critical role in determining what transpired during the event. Remember, the medical examiner conducting the autopsy may not have been at the crime scene. It is the job of the detective to inform the medical examiner / coroner by painting a picture with words and then with photographs.
What Detectives should expect to witness at the autopsy:
  • A full cleansing of the body prior to autopsy
  • A full external examination
  • Complete set of exemplars - body hair, fingernail clippings, etc.
  • Photographing of the body
  • Fingerprinting in unidentified cases
  • A complete set of X-Rays
  • Internal examination of the body
  • Examination of internal organs
  • Toxicology – blood, tissue samples
  • Path of bullet / path of stab wound(s) if present
  • Range of fire (distance between muzzle of the gun and victim)
What detectives need to learn / obtain from the autopsy:
  • The Post Mortem Interval (AKA Estimated Time of Death)
  • Manner, Cause and Mechanism of Death
  • Angle of trajectory
  • Length / depth of wounds
  • Wound charts
  • Evidence – i.e. ballistics
  • Gunshot Residue Testing (GSR)
  • Death certificate
After the completion of the autopsy, the detective should ask any follow up questions and or paraphrase the findings. Next, the detective should immediately record all of the findings on an investigative report for the case file as well as deliver any evidence to the laboratory for testing.
Remember, if it isn’t documented, it wasn’t done.
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The detective in my book is trying to solve the murder of a male found shot and dumped in the lake. Do all detectives attend the autopsies of their victims or is it done on special circumstances only?

Joe Giacalone, blogger over at Cold Case Squad replied:

Yes. The case detective has to appear usually by 9AM the next morning on every dead body case to be present at the autopsy.

They’re in the room as it happens and will observe, ask questions and answer questions that the ME or Coroner may have.

It is important that they bring investigative reports, crime scene photos and collect any evidence that the ME finds. I.E. ballistics.

 

There will be another post on this topic over at Cold Case Squad. I’ll post the link here when it’s finished.

You can also find Joe on Twitter.

Joe GiacaloneJoe Giacalone is a retired Detective Sergeant and former Commanding Officer of the Bronx Cold Case Squad that has investigated hundreds of homicides, cold cases and missing persons.

He is the author of the Criminal Investigative Function: A Guide for New Investigators - 2nd Edition published by Looseleaf Law Publications, Inc.

Writers and published authors need to take advantage of the number one method of book selling-the Internet. The Internet is the greatest selling and marketing tool available to an author. There are many opportunities and different ways to do achieve this. Here are a few online marketing tips for new authors.

One the simplest, most cost-effective ways to reach a broad online audience with your product and urge the reader into action is social networking. I’m referring to sites and online places where people share friendship and information. I love Goodreads and I get a lot of response whenever I post an event on that site. I am signed up not only as a reader, but as an author, which gives me a profile and the ability to promote my products. Other sites such as Ning, and Plaxo are also places you can let others know about you book, blog tour, or other marketing events.

The basic techniques for marketing fiction are the same as those of marketing nonfiction, so the methods work well in either case. However, a new author needs to know her target readership. A romance book will typically draw a different type of audience than a how-to book on gardening or fishing. So, when establishing a following on social networking sites such as Facebook, Twitter, GoodReads, Ning, Yahoo groups, and other sites, search for people by reading their profiles. Look for keywords that describe or relate to the topic of your book. Look for people who read the types of books you write.

The biggest mistake authors make when attempting to market their books is going out unprepared or without having a marketing plan or the information necessary to successfully create the buzz. Many authors do not even have a Web site or blog with a point of purchase that gives the reader enough information about the book to actually make an informed purchase. An author needs to know what components are necessary to have on a site in order to compete in today’s online marketplace. This is where a marketing plan comes in handy. It takes time and consistent effort to build your following and get people interested in your book before they will take action. It’s been said that someone must see or hear about a product seven times before they will buy it. Book marketing success may not happen overnight, but you will begin to see steady progress if you stay at it. It will take you about six months to complete everything in the eBook because some of it has to be set up such as Web sites, blog tours, and social networks.

Yvonne Perry

After spending several years in a corporate setting, Yvonne Perry decided to make a brave move and start her own freelance writing company. Leaving her full-time position as an administrative assistant in the sales and marketing division of a Fortune 500 company, she started her new career in 2003 with very little business experience. Today, she is the owner of Writers in the Sky Creative Writing Services where she serves as a freelance ghostwriter and editor for individuals and businesses.

By aligning herself and her company with other writers and experts in the field, Perry has networked her company to the top as a premier ghostwriter and editor in Nashville, Tennessee. She and her team stay busy on client projects such as writing media releases, ghostwriting and editing books, article writing, creating ad copy, and producing business documents. The team provides writing and editing services to individuals while offering a logical way for large corporations to outsource their writing needs. Thanks to the Internet, the company’s reputation has reached international status. With her wide variety of writing experience that includes impressive résumés, personal and professional bios, high-quality press releases and articles, as well as case studies, proposals and marketing pieces, Yvonne is ready to work with you on your next project.

For more on Yvonne Perry and a list of her books, please visit Writers in the Sky.

I’m going to first start off by saying that WPA exceeded my expectations.

I first heard about Writers’ Police Academy in 2011. Unfortunately, it wasn’t in my budget, so I was forced to let go and wait impatiently for another year to arrive.

When 2012 rolled around, I was grateful for being a member of Sisters in Crime and signed up a few days after the announcement.

Lee Lofland, the founder of the academy, along with the volunteers from SIRCHE and law enforcement were supportive and took the time to answer all our questions.

They taught classes on just about everything you could think of that had to do with criminal investigations, forensics, and general law enforcement.

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To enhance our experience we were able to see live demonstrations and participate in a string of activities that simulated what it’s like on the job.

Writers Police Academy 2012

Guest speakers included Marcia Clark, Lee Child, Dr. Elizabeth Murray, Dr. Katherine Ramsland, CJ Lyons and others. But the highlight of my trip was being able to shake the hands of Marcia, CJ, and Lee. To me they’re celebrities and I was in awe when they agreed to take pictures.

Their encouragement for us to write was well received along with the southern hospitality I experienced while talking with police and members of the community.

I will confess to becoming addicted to the sweet tea and no matter how hard I try, I still can’t get it here back home. Or maybe I’m looking for another reason to head back to NC.

There is so much to say about Writers’ Police Academy and there is no way that I could explain everything in one post. I can say to aspiring crime/mystery writers, this conference is a must and the materials I accumulated during my two days were overwhelming.

At one point, I ran out of note paper and had to use the back side to continue writing. Did I mention that I wasn’t able to attend every class on the list? You can bet that I’ve marked what I missed and will add them to my schedule for this year.

Thanks to everyone at WPA, Sisters in Crime and volunteers who made it possible for us to attend.

P.S.

I didn’t leave empty handed. I won three baskets full of books (mystery, crime fiction and forensics) at the raffle held during the banquet.

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